Tell me what y'all think about this poem?

Question

_Why I write_

I write because if scream

Someone will judge me

Because if I cry

They’ll make me got to counseling

Because my complain need to be heard

And my pencil & understand

Because I want people

To know the truth

Without having to see

The disappointment in their eyes

Because my voice is soft

And my words are strong

Because the others can’t write

And it’s a privilege

To be a scribe for them

Because If I don’t

Who will?

Answer 1

you have a few grammatical errors which make the poem seem uneasy to read

Answer 2

I like it... good job!