Tell me what you think about my myspace tracks?

Question

I recorded myself on these tracks so they not perfect. I want you to listen to "Iz You Wit It" and "Life pass me by". I need the singer to sing the hook over again on "Life pass me by", but listen to them for me real quick.

http://www.myspace.com/lyricalphase

Answer 1

that ish aint bad man forreal ya flow on iz you wit it is on point and the life pass me by was kinda quiet but the lyrics was good no doubt.

keep doin ya thang man

Answer 2

Slightly nasal

But a solid 4 out of 5 stars for an amateur  

Answer 3

that was pretty good 4/5 you kinda make no sense some times ... but  the rest was dope  

Answer 4

Not Bad.. U Got talent Lil homie...