Tell me what you think about my poem?

Question

As I lay me down to sleep

I softly hear the angels weep

Their silence screams from up above

Their tears are for my broken love

and as the sunlight fades to gray

I'm without your love another day

But as the blade becomes my friend

I bleed out pain from deep within

Your loves the only thing I need

Your eyes could solely set me free

But as I lie here not to wake

I pray the knife my life to take

And though this world it seems a lie

It all makes sense when I look in your eyes

And if you'd hold me one more day

I'd beg the Lord my soul to stay

Your the only truth I've ever known

the only pain I can't let go

so love me tomorrow and need me tonight

or my life will leave with the help of a knife

Answer 1

wow, i really like it. but it's really sad

Answer 2

wow....so i hope ur not serious about this poem...it is definitely very moving...i was glued to it, so yay!....this poem really shows how much u love ur other, and its very touching; however, the knife thing is a little scary...!