Tell me what you think about my poem

Question

darkness i feel

lonely i am

can't see or hear.

to not feel a touch

to feel only cold

to walk on nothing

and have nothing to walk for.

for a future trown away

to sit and wait for time to bring my life back again

Answer 1

I am no expert... just a beginner...

lost in darkness,

overwhelmed by loneliness.

neither can i see

nor hear.

do not feel a touch,

much of feeling cold.

walking in nothingness,

for i have none to walk for.

my future is thrown away.

i just sit and wait

for aid to assist me,

and bring my life back again.

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