Tell me what you think about my rhyme?

Question

I used have dreams of being scareface

I said let the da worry about a drug case

I didn’t care about my people so I sold base

I was out for mine to bad if ya can’t keep pace

you can’t do no better if you don’t know no better

I was slangin the snow I controlled the weather

I got robbed so I decided to invest in a beretta

**** what you heard about me I’m a go getta

Like nas said “whose world is this” It was mine

Then one day I thought about my life in the grind

do I really want to be worried about whos behind

me and my click so what if the block isn’t buying my ****

I heard about the revolution and I wanted to be apart of it

I thought do I want people saying make way for the bad guy

do I want it to be my fault that a mothers son happened to die

If i pray for forgiveness and pretend that I never did this

I would only be lying to myself my heart is to far gone

I just hope I can change the world with the power of song

Answer 1

Good

Like It

=D

8.5/10

Answer 2

ok.......i'll give it a 7.5/10.

its was good tho.

Answer 3

that was priddy straight joe, 8/10