Tell me what you think of my poem.?

Question

I dont think this is very good, but its from the heart. Honest comments please. And tell me why you think whatever it is you think.

I still miss you,

I don’t know why,

But it doesn’t matter how hard I try,

I can’t forget you,

I loved you then,

I love you still,

Memories haunt me,

Every time I close my eyes,

It’s your smile I see.

I miss you still,

You broke my heart,

It still hurts to think about,

I loved you then,

Why do I love you still?

I Wish I could release this memory,

Make it disappear,

But you will forever hold my heart.

<3

~an average girl

Answer 1

Its not really my type of peom but I see that it has come from a very real place and thats good to see in a peom.

Answer 2

Nice!!! It sounds like a song Linkin Park would make! And that&#039;s good!

Answer 3

gurl dis is nice..i really like it..it sounds like u are hurt...but dont stress it i been there and done that..honey u can do better..i kno u probably love him but if he doesnt see that then he must be too stupid to realize...u can do better...

Answer 4

......    great!!!!!