Tell me what you think of these names for my book?

Question

PEOPLE

Ambros Luther Caerellius

Rozalia Aila Cantaber

Zardra Athlossine

Bruscious Cantaber

Camlyn Ilina Aurelianus

Garran

Erikkaiy Nolus

Verrulus Ryder

Marsyas Rune

Allulah Tullius

PLACES

Hazel Halls

Rosulaura

Ana Syltia

Langidrik

Answer 1

If it's a fantasy book, they sound fantastic! If not, they sound a bit far fetched, if not too eloquent. VERY pretty though. I love them.

♥Graceful Little Alice♥

Answer 2

I like them, but to me it sounds like if your story is what i think it will be like then someone will probably sue you for copyright infringement. Now, that being said, I don't want to get you down - that's the last thing I want to do - but you have to assume the possibility that your novel might parallel to other fantasy novels a little too close. I tell this to a lot of people who call themselves writing their first fantasy novel (I am in the process of finishing my first one - 153,614 words), and I hope that some of them at least give my advice some thought. Try to stay away from cliche`s at any cost. Now, I'm not saying that everything you come up with in the book will be completely original because it is impossible to create fiction without borrowing from something else, but don't make it obvious that you were copying notes. Make it your own, and you'll be glad you did. I like your names, but unless youir story has interesting elements, the quality of the names won't matter very much.

Answer 3

They're alright. I'm guessing this book has to do with magic, or something similar to that? Just because that one person has the last name Rune.

Well anyways, remember you want your readers to be able to actually remember the names. Just looking at these, I know I can't pronounce half of them.

Good luck.

Love always,

Pippa

Answer 4

great..i think its fantasy am i right...

Answer 5

It kind of sounds like you are trying to hard to make up names. Names don't have to be so Fancy... but I did like the name Marsyas Rune.