Tell me what you think of this poem,

Question

Your coffin door, open wide

With your lover on one side

Looking at you with pained eyes

Too shocked to even cry

He talks to you though you can’t hear

You were his love, his heart, his tears

You were his life, his precious time

He’d marveled at the words you’d chime

Though your memory will carry on

It’s hard to know you’re forever gone

And before he left to go back home

In your hand he placed one red rose.

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i think it is really good..what do you think?

Answer 1

great!!! b apoet

Answer 2

Pie091,

What's the title? I would do a rewrite... But the overall subject matter is great yet he or she takes a morbid issue and turn it into a nice soliloquy...  Grade  AA

Answer 3

very nice.

would be better if a few more lines were added in the middle but still i applaud whoever wrote it.

Answer 4

That's wonderful.