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Tell me what you think of this poem? The Tree Line?

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This poem is what I consider to be my latest master-piece.... I realize the punctuation is off as is the rythm in a certain place, but there's a reason for that...explicate my friends :p. Think transcendental.

The Tree Line

Upon a stroll through garden great

I chanced a glance toward the green

Where all the forest trees were hung

Upon each other, bough on bough

It seemed merely mother nature's hug

This pack of trees, much like a crowd

That stands along the edge of sane

Indeed, distinctly drew the line

Between beginning forest leaves

And ending grassy blades of brown.

But one lone tree stood beyond the rest

This one lone tree which seemingly took the quest

Stood alone, obviously blessed.

A patch of green, a sea of brown.

Although in years to come the tree

Will be consumed, fellows swift

To overtake once tree line resets,

This single tree remains to be

The lead, the light, but the loner.

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  1. This is not my style of poetry, but it is written well and you can clearly hear what it is saying=)


  2. beautiful i love it!

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