Tell me what you think of this poem of mine?

Question

Prince Imperfect

Your prince of the castle and the land

Bellow your perfect voice grand,

Wallow in fine food and wine

And dance the ball joyous times.

Hanson and humorous host

But in his wealth he wanted most,

To love a women so ordinary

And treasure her stolen heart so merry.

This vast kingdom that hes alone

Is but of gray bricks not a home,

Prince of perfect and of all

But left an empty heart to toil.

Wishes for a princess to stay

The imperfect prince will wait today.

Answer 1

fairy taily kind.