Tell me what you think of this poem

Question

Unforgiving Scars

A giving hart

I once proclaimed

So foolish and young

I gave every thing to one

Blinded by emotions

And focus lost

I Walked around with

Clouded thoughts

Not able to realize

Her eyes was forsaken

By someone before

I soon found myself

In a place

Foretold by the people

I ignored

Beaten down

To the ground

Unable to stand

With the painful scar

Pulling me down

Looking around

Only to find

My once giving hart

Torn apart

Answer 1

i looove it it's so filled with sorrow and emotion...it's beautiful i wish i had half the talent as you

Answer 2

It wobbles at first, then finishes solid. Not bad, W7E.