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Tell me what you think ... poem by me?

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Love might be difficult but being alone is much worst

Introducing someone to my heart would have to be a first

You are the number one reason my life has greatly modified

Every word you said dismissed those tears i had cried

I use to search for a knight, of course one in shining armor

And did try love twice before its true third times a charmer

Our relationship no longer has any signifigance,

But i cant stop loving you this makes no type of sence

Why did you leave so sudden, and replace our love?

Thought you and i fit perfect together like as a hand is to a glove

Last words spoken that day were "d**n.. i really hate you"

Then later that night i cried knowing what i had said wasnt true

Ever wished there were someway time would just turn itself back

Wishing is the story of my life, because me without you doesnt even sound on track

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  1. its beautiful!


  2. Well at least the last two words in the first two sentences rhymed but after that point it went downhill from there.  Not that it was a very high hill to begin with.  My answer is so great it fits me perfectly like as a hand is to goes in a glove.

  3. This was really good but you just need to work on your spelling and grammar and it will be perfect pretty much.Just keep writing and good luck. (^.^)

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