Tell what you think of my poem?

Question

title: relax my heart

only time will tell

if i really know you that well

but right now you make me feel so blissful

i am exceedingly grateful

for having you by my side

so let me take you on this little ride

see you give me such peace

such tranquility

feels just like a surreal dream

but you put my heart at ease

when you kiss me

my sweet honey

your light purges the darkness in my soul

and when you hold me, promise never to let go

sirenic shadows shifting silently

into the warmth of your clouded eyes

you acquit your passions so tenderly

that it catches me by surprise

ive made my acquiantances with heartache

violent passion intakes

but never have i graced such

a gentle touch

that it gives my cheeks a rosey blush

thankyou for guiding me

teaching me to walk by the faith of love

when my eyes fail me

Answer 1

Its good very good   u sound very happy  and if its true and not just a poem  let this person help u keep yourself in that foreever blissful place   =)

Answer 2

Hey that is beautiful! Very good!  Wish I could go on that little ride too! :)

Answer 3

I love it!

Answer 4

It was Cool

Answer 5

well it is ok, its definetly better that the ones I write.... if you change the ending it would be better but it is good, you are good but you can inprove, try not to care about what other people say its your poem, it shoul come from your feelings