Thankyou Card... Is this ambiguous or is the question clear.?

Question

Thank you... Thanks a lot!

Carefull words thrown carelessly

into the space between our eyes/

But, I stole a look at your hands

hands bronzed by the sun.

The same sun that heats our earth, blinds my eyes

dries the persperation from your brow.

You planted a simple tree in my earth

but in my mind grow forests and rivers flow.

Surely you are my brother,

returned.

Strange that those who love me give naught

but cut flowers

delivered by the hands of strangers.

Answer 1

the rhythm  suggests to me that Ur poem was written in other language then translated.. some imbalance in rhyming (brow ..flow) ..I like it ..expressing Ur love to Ur hardworking brother who gives and plant 4 the others who just reap. A picture of "looking for justice & apreciation.

Answer 2

Lovely, to give back an earthly gift, I have planted a few trees

in memory of others, The act is heart warming, as is your

pondering poem

Answer 3

I like.  It seems that you are the person, buried, commenting about the shallowness of many and the love of one.  Thoughts to ponder here.