Question:

That do you think about my poem that i wrote when i was feeling down?

by Guest21422  |  earlier

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What do you call when you feel

that everything is coming to an end

there tears going down your face

you close your eyes and you see his face

there only two words for what you feel

HEART BROKEN !!!!

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  1. no

    not orignal

    heartache

    yeah weve all heard about it

    *yawn*


  2. well yeah

  3. thats good!  just a little too ordinary I would say a little touch up work and it would be really good!!!!

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