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The Beast within Your Heart...what do you think?

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Another poem/song that I have written and would very much value your thoughts on it. Do you feel any emotions when you read it or is it just another poem to forget?

The Beast within Your Heart

Once upon a time

Not so long ago

I met the queen of my heart

She ruled with love

She made me so happy

Have you ever been in love?

Have you ever felt happiness?

Why did you let the beast in your heart win?

Why did you break our love?

Why, Oh why, Oh why?

She used to make me smile

Used to take away my tears

She used to tell me her fears

Used to tell me her dreams too

She said I made her happy

Have you ever been in love?

Have you ever felt happiness?

Why did you let the beast in your heart win?

Why did you break our love?

Why, Oh why, Oh why?

We used to plan for the future

Used to say we would be together forever

We planned where we would live when we were older

And how many children we would have too

That’s when you took one look and decided to take it all away

Have you ever been in love?

Have you ever felt happiness?

Why did you let the beast in your heart win?

Why did you break our love?

Why, Oh why, Oh why?

I guess I will never know the answers

I guess I won’t have happiness

I hope you can find peace

I hope one day you can find love too

But remember that my love for her is forever

I will love her forever and ever

Have you ever been in love?

Have you ever felt happiness?

Why did you let the beast in your heart win?

Why did you break our love?

Why, Oh why, Oh why?

17/07/08

Written by Broken Heart ©

Copyright 2008

Thanks in advance for your comments

Best Wishes

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  1. Hard to tell in which heart the beast loomed it's ugly head.

    A bit wordy, But yes your emotions show.

    Blessings.

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