The office friend poem revised. Inspired by Maltese Breeder?

Question

re- edited.

here is the link to my first one.

http://au.answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AgiDQ6gFBtqUBwvKRTIOI1Dg5gt.;_ylv=3?qid=20080719094513AAAsBka

The Office Friend....

Your eyes so hypnotising,

Like the sun it radiates,

decorative buttons glisten,

fingers dance, upon your keys,

Constant on the run,

always their when i'm in need,

Friends network together,

Sharing knowledge whilst we read,

Closed lips share conversations,

Play games and having fun,

Viewing our surroundings,

Quietly without much sound,

Intellectual capability,

So much greater than my own,

Mind travels unforseen Landscapes,

Horizons never peered,

Within a new dimension,

Captivate as well, intrigue,

World not like our own,

Slowly consuming me,

Interactive buttons,

Knowledge reached by -

Addictive touch,

My friend, my foe, my ally,

We always keep in touch.

Answer 1

Oh my Galactia guess you were inspired!  LOL --It's good some of my favorite lines in this are:

closed lips share conversation--this says so much with out saying a thing!

fingers dance, upon your keys--yes they really seem to do a dance!

within a new dimension--so fitting!

and the finale--

Knowledge reached by -Addictive touch!

Ahhh --frosting on the cake!!!

Good Job well done! So well penned!!Cheers!!

Answer 2

Wow. MY MALTESE BROTHAZ RULE! I'm half maltese and a bit of a poet so I love it!

Answer 3

Great images, need now to work on some transitioning as there appears to be a lot of random thoughts from line to line.