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Theres a Woman of water, and I swam in the waves of her hair

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she said i love you,and from her mouth I fell, just then she kissed me and turned into an ocean again >>>>-------> diary

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  1. The wind whispered I love you, and through the clouds I fell. Just then you kissed me... and turned back into a dream...


  2. "we have lingered in the chambers of the sea

    with sea-girls wreathed in sea-weed red and brown

    'til human voices wake us

    and we drown..."

    that is by T.S.Eliot

  3. I'm not sure if that's the whole poem or a question or both.  I thought maybe we'd play with it and I'd add the next stanza... and so on so forth... could be fun.  Here goes...

    There is a man of stone, and I built my castle upon his chest

    He said, "I love you." and from his grasp I fell, and just then he kissed me and I wept a new ocean.  

    EDIT:  INTERESTING!

    EDIT x2:  No silly, I'm not talking about me.  You wrote the first part as the man talking to the woman, I simply replied as the woman talking back to the man.  Don't worry, you're safe around me.

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