Thesis statement on terrorism? any english professor!?

Question

i have to restate this thesis statement in my own words..

"a national i.d. card would be much more effective in preventing terrorism than profiling millions of men simply because of their appearance."

any ideas on a restating this thesis statement in your own words?

Answer 1

You could put something like this:

Although racial profiling is used as a technique to improve national security, a nationwide passport would be a more sufficient method to protect the (county) from terrorist threats.

Please make up your own otherwise it's plagiarizing.