Third attempt of drawing people

Question

Some may know that i have been practicing on how to draw real people. This picture below is my third attempt, what do you think of this drawing?

First one:

http://i337.photobucket.com/albums/n399/YellowMug/DSC00036.jpg

First one but a close up:

http://i337.photobucket.com/albums/n399/YellowMug/DSC00037.jpg

Answer 1

its very good - a whole lot better than I could do

Answer 2

ooohh shes scary ;)

Answer 3

Good but the proportion's off.

The eyes, and the space between the eyes should be the same, and they should be half way down the head. the ears should be roughly the same position as the nose and the same length.

Very pretty though really good for your 3rd time!! :D

Answer 4

wow the eyes are very dramatic. tone them down a bit.  

Answer 5

I thin the eyes are too big and the ear needs to move down.  Try drawing without color first, then when you get better at that, add color.

Answer 6

You should use the appropriate proportions for your drawings to make them more realistic..

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check out this site for more tips on drawing..

Answer 7

Ok lets not get too slushy here,,you have a long way to go before you have mastered portraiture,however you work does posses a very feminine look and has captured an expression,what you will need to do is work on shading your darker areas and getting away from drawing by using lines,faces don`t have a black edge to them but have shading,just check out some of Leonardo`s work to see a master at work,copy some of his sketches if you want to see how and what can be achieved

Answer 8

Really good, but I would suggest you might like to make the eyes a little smaller to be in proportion with the rest of the face if you want it to look a little more realistic.

Answer 9

its a good drawing but its styalised.  thats not a bad thing, artists should develop their own style but if you wanted a realistic/natural portrait then you need to pay attention to proportion and detail of the persons actual features more.