This has been hiding in the back of my notebook. What do you think?

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Driving rain awakens desires

primitive passionate want

Touches linger

random explorations

need overtakes concious thought

merging, colliding

ever climbing

driving rain

shuddering euphoric

collapse

Answer 1

i like it too. :) hurrah, hurrah!!!!

Answer 2

i love when it rains..

alot is desirable and exciting.

you made a wild poem!

how about " Storm Fever" for a title?

Answer 3

"Hi!"

It's beautiful.

WELL DONE! : )

Answer 4

"Shuddering euphoric/collapse;" amazing.  The description of the act is worthy of the highest praise.

Answer 5

So then...what do showers do for you?  lol   Rainwater... good for growing gardens and apparently something else!  Good one.

Answer 6

not bad. I,m picturing a dreary day full of thought and emotions of being alone wanting someone to love to make an otherwise useless feeble day into a moment of desire and rememberance, A thought interlude of what could be but doesn,t seem likely and the knowledge of another passing day of what could have been and in reality what is.