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This is a new song my friend wrote. Do you like this song?

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Okay so this is the third song my friend wrote. I think its his best yet! What do you guys think? We are also excepting tips if you have any. Please leave an answer because they are all very appreciated! :)

ALSO no chorus because it was not made to have one. To hear the music that goes with it look up FL studio violin art.

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Here are the lyrics:

___Even the world has hope___

Lookin back at memories, brothas drinken hennasy

Only one way to live b*****s killen little kids

But what do we do we just watch and sing a song

and start to talk about what just went on. Its

like we dont even care whats happening now. People

screamin little girls bleeding wondering how. I

never thought we would see a better place. But

im right if we dont start change'n our place.

Whats going on with the human race? I dont know.

Murderers, drug dealers, taking control. Never

lookin back to see them screamin. Only lookin

back to help them stealin, shooting n misleading

our people. Corrupting our minds looking to take

over our lives. No better place in mind. Lookin

for crimes. Only rhymes can explain this time.

Nothing can change if we stay the same. Nothing

can change if you always play the same game. Only

the struggle will tear us apart. Just make a

difference and you will have the heart to understand,

that even our world has a chance. So get up help

another for a chance. And remember theres always

a problem that no one can solve but if you try

more problems will be resolved. So i'll keep singing

with this song. We always got a chance just lookin

for the last glance of our world. Hopeing this song

makes a difference in our world. Looking through the eyes

of a little babies mind. Penetrate the walls, knocking

bathroom down stalls saving the lives of innocent calls.

Change our world one step at a time. Everytime you see

something going wrong. Think of this song and help that

innocents life from going gone. Because if he died how do

you think his momma would survive. Listening to this vibe

might save a life, if you know the problem and understand

the solution. Nothing should stop your from producin

a conclusion. Just have hope and you can do what im

doin.

Good luck guys. We can ALL make a difference. Just gotta know you can.

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  1. Nice flow! :)


  2. I like it!

    Reminds me of the The Script's 'We Cry'!

    Your friend's got talent!  

  3. wooow it's reallyyy good :|

    it seems like it would make a good rap song


  4. I think it's pretty good, your friends really good at flowing through the words, it's sort of hard to explain.

  5. dude just admit that you wrote this song! but no reason to be ashamed, it 's pretty d**n good!

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