This is a poem when i was cutting myself?

Question

Is this real enough for you, cuts beneath my skin...

now and than i thought it was you who stopped everything.

But now to come to find out your the thing that makes the inside

of me scream out.

I want to cry but I dont know why I just need to identify

myself instead of die.

Dont you go, dont you go I want to fugure out how low I can go.

Satan you devil stay away from me. I can feel your fire building

up to me. Why..Why do i have to know whenever someone lets

me go. To fall off a bridge and still live tomarrow, why cant i die

why do you spi please dont leave I need you in my life and to find

out that im in love with the knife. guilt and shame overly dramatic

Not a game. if i was lying i would no be here trying to fix it. When

do i ever get help i do not know...

As soon as my family gets help with me.

Now i see my life has been everything

I-DO-NOT-TRUST!

What do you think of my poem?

It's my inner deep feelings from a long time ago....

I used to cut myself but i went to treatment and im

Better now...

Answer 1

Plat your a r****d.

why would she say she used to cut herself if she didnt? a LOT of people do. maybe not people from your time period cuz u seem a bit old but seriously.

what does anyone gain by that?

lying to get attention from people u dont even know and never will, thats low. and im pretty sure noone does that (except maybe you..ya know)

i couldnt give u a thumbs down so this is my way of doing it.

"im not a credible source" -true that.

Anyway, its good. just think about the way u present it.

like hit enter after every sentence

it would flow better.

here have a star.

Answer 2

Cutting is serious.  I have a hard time believing that you were a cutter.  At least when you wrote this.  (listen if you were you were, you don't have to convince me).  You see when people cut, they don't really know why, it's a compulsion.  

That really doesn't matter.  What does matter is that I don't think this poem is any good.  (Plenty of people will).  It felt unfocused to me.  

Anyway, I hope if you did cut you got to the bottom of it and are now a stronger person.  

Keep writing you at the very least have a great imagination