This is called Delusions please tell me what you think!?

Question

Singing in the rain,

dancing with chaos.

I'm loving thunder,

playing a dangerous game.

I'm crawling along the edge,

daring to fall in

to the deep dark trench.

Sometimes I think dark,

is better than light.

I'm hoping for a special sight,

I want to be in control.

I want it to be only because I said so.

Flirting with the voices,

Hiding in the caves,

I'm only asking for,

trouble.

Answer 1

That's lovely. Now, it's time to do a "twin" for it; going into the light.