This is my Yugioh Deck could you rate or fix it?

Question

Monsters (21)

D.D. Survivor x3

Gren Maju Da Eiza x2

Command Knight

Caius the Shadow Monarch

Penguin Soldier

X- Head Cannon x2

Y- Dragon Head x2

Z- Metal Tank

Marauding Captain

Mystic Swordsman LV.4

Drillroid x2

Labyrinth Wall

Golden Homunculous

D.D. Scout Plane

Sangan

Fusion Monster (1)

XYZ- Dragon Cannon

Spell (11)

Dimension Distortion

Big Bang Shot

Dimensional Fissure x3

Frontline Base

Mystical Space Typhoon

Grand Convergence

Swords of Concealing Light

Kaiser Colosseum

Enemy Controller

Traps (8)

Macro Cosmos

Ordeal of a Traveller

Graverobber's Retribution

Return from the Different Dimension

Negate Attack

Curse of Royal

Sakuretsu Armor

Magic Jammer

Answer 1

well it OK you should get three blue eyes white dragons you know blue eyes unmilite dragon

Answer 2

nice get an exodia and you will be on your way

the thing is are they real yugioh cards or the shiny backround ones        rating:5/5

Answer 3

( 6.4 out of 10 )

Only because I can see cards that really don't belong bro...

if it's a XYZ removal deck then check out this deck bro...

The deck may be a little big but the idea is to get out the XYZ-Dragon Cannon and Golden Homoculas to destroy your opponent dude...

MONSTERS:22

x3 Golden Homoculas

x3 X-Head Cannon

x3 Y-Dragon Head

x3 Z-Metal Tank

x3 Marauding Captain

x1 Marshmallon

x3 D.D Survivor

x3 Gran Maju Da Eiza

SPELLS:13

x2 Kaiser Colleseum

x2 Soul Absorbtion

x2 Magical Mallet

x1 Mystical Space Typhoon

x1 Frontline Base

x1 Dimensional Fissure

x1 Different Dimension Capsule

x3 DDR-Different Dimension Reincarnation

TRAPS:10

x2 Macro Cosmos

x2 Negate Attack

x2 Graverobber's Retribution

x2 D.D Dynamite

x1 Return from the Different Dimension

x1 Trap Jammer

FUSIONS:12

x3 XYZ-Dragon Cannon

x3 XY-Dragon Cannon

x3 XZ-Tank Cannon

x3 YZ-Dragon Tank

Answer 4

7/10 but you should really get rid of the tanks they don't fit in