This is my first Trigee. This of course came with some patriots ideas =). What do you think?

Question

The land of the free...............The home of the brave

But for how long?..................But at what cost?

It's up to us..........................And choose we must

To bless this land.................To do our duty

To honor our fathers..............To be great again.

Answer 1

This is as good as any Trigee I've seen on this site.  You sir are a true patriot and it is your spirit that gives America its greatest hope for the future.  Bravo, and congratulations on what is most assuredly a Trigee and a statement about what is good and true in Man.  Thank you for reminding your readers that the price of freedom is truth, valor, and sacrifice, which take many forms...

Answer 2

The form is fine, it reads well, the content is meaningful. but it reads like a cliche. It was just OK for me.

Answer 3

And you hit a grand slam on your first try..Very Patriotic Also a reminder of Freedom is not Free.. We ALL must sacrifice Someone or Something to keep our Nation strong

Answer 4

This is not my favorite form to read,

but for the message held within yours

it was an honor to have done so.

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Answer 5

Fantastic success on your first Trigee!

Perfectly done with a message that needs to be heard.

Thank you.