This is my first attempt at writing a poem... can you please arrange it?

Question

I was sitting in my class, bored, and it was my English period and i started writing this and it turned out to be like this:

Oh, the agony and the pain,

Of bearing our English teacher who is so lame

I doubt it even if she knows the meaning of teaching,

Her teaching is more like as if she's teasing.

Oh! She doesn't even know who's good in her subject,

All she does in the class is complain and object.

She is so lazy and too, so slow

We have had to bear her for 2 years, Oh BLOW!

What her name is wouldn't you want to know?

Well, she is dear Mrs. Williams for you!

P.S. I know its rude, but i just wrote it for fun. And this is my first attempt at writing a poem, and it seems more like normal sentences than a poem!

Please, i would really appreciate it if you could just arrange it for me into stanzas! Thanks a tonne!

And please, do comment and tell me what you think!

Answer 1

haha... lol... this is good... awesome!

Answer 2

It may b fun for u but it describes my English teacher to da point .

from me , no changes required in your poem

AWESOME.

Answer 3

when you write from the heart, it's shear poetry. It reads real good to me. those are your thoughts and i feel you should leave it as is. good job