This is my poem... can you please arrange it for me?

Question

I was sitting in my class, bored, and it was my English period and i started writing this and it turned out to be like this:

Oh, the agony and the pain,

Of bearing our English teacher who is so lame

I doubt it even if she knows the meaning of teaching,

Her teaching is more like as if she's teasing.

Oh! She doesn't even know who's good in her subject,

All she does in the class is complain and object.

She is so lazy and too, so slow

We have had to bear her for 2 years, Oh BLOW!

What her name is wouldn't you want to know?

Well, she is dear Ms. Williams for you!

P.S. I know its rude, but i just wrote it for fun. And this is my first attempt for writing a poem, and it seems more like sentences than a poem!

Please, i would really appreciate it if you could just arrange it for me into stanzas! Thanks a tonne!

Answer 1

beautiful poem...god bless you. :)

Answer 2

your poem is fine the way it is u might wanna edit it a lil take away too, and maybe instead of blow use no and change the ending a lil to:  would like to know her name just in case u need to know well she is dear ms Williams neither friend nor foe just the teacher who makes English suck and blow: but i do think you did a wonderful job and could probably get pretty good at poetry u should put some time and effort into another and let us view i bet u will do well

Answer 3

that is soo cool...

Answer 4

I don't see that arranging

will make it any better.

Enjoy it for what it is..

don't leave any stray

copies neat your English

classroom.

oldbob

Answer 5

Oh, the agony and the pain,

having an English teacher so lame.

I doubt she knows the meaning of teaching,

for she instructs as though she is teasing.

She doesn't understand true talent in her subject,

all does does to pass the time is complain and object.

She is so lazy and so so slow,

and we have to have her for two years, Oh BLOW!

What her name is, would you care to know?

Well, she is dear Ms. Williams for you!