This is probably my newest poem... been away a while.?

Question

Finding Comfort

Do not let your heart fade into darkness

Do not let it drift away

Like the ghostly wisps of mist

That rise from the cooling earth

and vanish into the darkening evening

Do not let the setting sun

steal the warmth or light in your eyes

Do not allow the tender night

to be your prison

Let the growing darkness be your haven

let each sparkling star

be your healing crystals

glowing in the indigo sky

let their dome be your comforting blanket

Allow the peaceful beauty and serenity

to touch each aching wall of your heart

let it be still

let it rest

And night will never be your torment again

Answer 1

you are amazing

i wish my poetry was as deep as this

you are an excellent poetess

Answer 2

can i say wow?

thats deep...  :]]

Answer 3

Wow. That was really good. I like how it brings out the goodness of night. And i really like this part "Let the growing darkness be your haven

let each sparkling star be your healing crystals" that was good.

Answer 4

a little shallow and repetitive for me. Try contructing some more thought-provoking ideas, perhaps?

Jess

Answer 5

wow! you are very cleavor  :)

Answer 6

amazing

Answer 7

thts really good!