This is the first time i have ever written a movie/film review. Is this good enough for high school? TITANIC ?

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Titanic is the epic tale of a young love affair and a mesmerizing disaster flick masterfully woven together to create a truly unparalleled movie experience. Based on the 1912 shipwreck, the story of Titanic is intelligently, and flawlessly captivated. Groundbreaking and emotional events ultimately leading to a story of survival and hope. The complexity of the “unsinkable” and unassailable ship known as “The Ship of Dreams” unsuccessfully struck an iceberg while on route to New York City from Southampton, England. The catastrophic events led to several attempts of survival and subsistence.

Written and directed by three time Oscar winner James Cameron, Titanic offers a wide array of theatrical special effects, musical masterpieces, consummate performances and a staggering $200,000,000 budget. James Cameron brilliantly paired Leonardo DiCaprio and Kate Winslet as love interests. Their undeniable chemistry and harmony truly create a beautiful and spellbinding movie. An emotional and flawless performance by three time Oscar nominee Leonardo DiCaprio portrayed as Jack Dawson ultimately proved him to be a legendary actor and conveniently rose him to mega star fame. Five time Oscar nominee Kate Winslet as Rose Dewitt Bukater successfully and exquisitely established her as an outstanding actress. With a rather long runtime of approximately 194 minutes, this movie does not disappoint. Produced by Paramount Pictures and Twentieth Century-Fox Film Corporation , Titanic is appropriately rated PG-13 for mild violence, nudity, sensuality, and brief language.

Fourteen Academy Award nominations and eleven wins ties Titanic with the 1959 feature film Ben-Hur as most Oscar wins. Outstanding music written by James Horner successfully captured the true meaning of the movie in the multi-platinum hit “My Heart Will Go On”, performed by the greatest selling female singer of all time Celine Dion. Exceptional costume design by Deborah L. Scott appropriately and effectively recreated the pre-WW1 classic elegance and sophisticated vogue. Impressively James Horner pushed the boundary of special effects when he enlisted the breakthrough digital technology team Digital Domain.

In essence Titanic is an extraordinary love story with several twists and turns. Brilliant performances by Leonardo DiCaprio and Kate Winslet genuinely make Titanic a world-wide success. Incredible screen-writing and direction by James Cameron confirms and sustains his ability to create a truly magnificent masterpiece. This movie will appropriately meet and exceed anyone’s expectations. Popularly known as the most successful movie of all time Titanic has yet to be matched. A definite two thumbs up.

Answer 1

omygosh i only read the first paragraph and realized ur sooo much better at writing than me!! good job!

Answer 2

I've made some comments in parentheses. General comments are at the end.

Titanic is the epic tale of a young love affair and a mesmerizing disaster flick masterfully woven together to create a truly unparalleled movie experience. Based on the 1912 shipwreck, the story of Titanic is intelligently, and flawlessly captivated. Groundbreaking and emotional events ultimately leading to a story of survival and hope. (This is a fragment. Either change "leading" to "lead" or add something else to complete the sentence.)The complexity of the “unsinkable” and unassailable ship known as “The Ship of Dreams” unsuccessfully struck an iceberg while on route to New York City from Southampton, England. (This is a weird sentence. First of all, the way it's worded now it means that the complexity struck an iceberg. Either take out the complexity part, or add something else to the end of your sentence, like "The complexity...'The Ship of Dreams' which struck...draws the viewer in." Also, take out the word "unsuccessfully", it doesn't make sense here.) The catastrophic events led to several attempts of survival and subsistence. (This is a pretty flat sentence to end your paragraph with. I don't think subsistence is the right word to use here either. Try to make this more exciting. Like, "The catastrophic events led to desperate attempts for survival in the frigid waters" or "led both to outstanding heroics and shameful cowardice." You don't have to use either of those, but just make this more exciting than what you have.)

Written and directed by three time Oscar winner James Cameron, Titanic offers a wide array of theatrical special effects, musical masterpieces, consummate performances and a staggering $200,000,000 budget (Once you watch the movie you have a 200 million dollar budget? You either need to put that in another sentence, or put another verb in front of it.). James Cameron brilliantly paired Leonardo DiCaprio and Kate Winslet as love interests. Their undeniable chemistry and harmony truly create a beautiful and spellbinding movie. An emotional and flawless performance by three time Oscar nominee Leonardo DiCaprio portrayed (playing, not portrayed as) as Jack Dawson ultimately proved him to be a legendary actor and conveniently rose (take out conveniently, it sounds like you're implying some illegality. Maybe, say "shot" instead of "rose", or at least "raised") him to mega star fame. Five time Oscar nominee Kate Winslet (Winslet's role as) as Rose Dewitt Bukater successfully and exquisitely (take out successfully and exquisitely, they're describing how she was established, not how she acted. You could move "exquisitely" earlier, and say, Kate Winslet's exquisitely performed role as..." but I would leave out "successfully") established her as an outstanding actress. With a rather long runtime of approximately 194 minutes, this movie does not disappoint. (Maybe, "Despite a rather long runtime") Produced by Paramount Pictures and Twentieth Century-Fox Film Corporation , Titanic is appropriately rated PG-13 for mild violence, nudity, sensuality, and brief language.

Fourteen Academy Award nominations and eleven wins ties Titanic with the 1959 feature film Ben-Hur as (for, not as) most Oscar wins. Outstanding music written by James Horner successfully captured the true meaning of the movie in the multi-platinum hit “My Heart Will Go On”, performed by the greatest selling female singer of all time Celine Dion. Exceptional costume design by Deborah L. Scott appropriately and effectively recreated the pre-WW1 classic elegance and sophisticated vogue. Impressively James Horner (do you mean James Cameron?) pushed the boundary of special effects when he enlisted the breakthrough digital technology team Digital Domain.

In essence Titanic is an extraordinary love story with several twists and turns. Brilliant performances by Leonardo DiCaprio and Kate Winslet genuinely make Titanic a world-wide success. Incredible screen-writing and direction by James Cameron confirms and sustains his ability to create a truly magnificent masterpiece. This movie will appropriately meet and exceed anyone’s expectations. Popularly known as the most successful movie of all time (comma here) Titanic has yet to be matched. A definite two thumbs up.

Very good, but it seemed like you were using some adjectives that didn't really belong. However, it's a good review overall, good job!