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This is the last good poem I made. I've had writer's block for about a year and a half. I need help!?

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Jon was a teen like the others we see,

He thought the way to survive was suicide,

Never did someone think of what he could be,

Besides the outsider that he lived as his life,

When he was 3 his father left him,

When he was 8 his mother beat him,

When he was 12 no one loved him,

Except for God, who knew, created, and cared for him,

This was just the beginning of his life,

Still all these things made him cry,

He never understood why he was despised,

Then at 16, when he had enough,

He went to school with a deadly gun,

He killed 5 people then he looked up above,

He shot himself, BANG, then fell with a thud,

Just to think that this started at three,

When he didn't understand what life would bring,

Just down the street a girl named Carly,

She was good, She was loved,

She went to church every Sunday,

She was just 1 of those 5, who fell and died,

She never hurt him or knew him well,

But she was killed by that guy who hit the ground when he fell,

It wasn't just Jon's fault why they died,

It started from just a few cruel acts,

You can say its wrong but that’s the facts,

Just imagine those who fell in cried,

After their best friend Carly died,

So listen to me when I speak and tell:

When you hurt someone you'll hurt someone else as well

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