This one is revised. What do you think?

Question

Gravity fields

Fill out in the sorrow

At the out take

Retrieve the beads

And dive ever into prayer

Sing in a song detracted

In an outro of the attracted

Ring out in a singularity

And soar in a hyper reality

Ascribe to the space deflate

And act on the orbital inflate

In theater gravity spectrate.

Answer 1

Hmm,

It Seems The Rhyming Was Too Forced However.

The Flow Was Also Somewhat Scattered.

Though , Overall, The Poem Was Rather Nice. :]