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Question

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SOFTNESS

Whispered words melt,

passing by,

the thoughts

inside tumble

as you smile

Strands of hair part

as an ear strains

to listen

Softly passing by,

they fall to your toes,

these scattered, whispered words.

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Answer 1

"Secrets"  This poem of few words says quite a bit!

Answer 2

"Hi!"

SOFTNESS

Whispered words melt,

passing by,

the thoughts

inside tumble

as you smile

(words melted as my mind hits temperature of 42 Degrees Celsius, so therefore I could not perceive or interpret the words you had written).

Strands of hair part

as an ear strains

to listen

(Pardon, What did you say?. I am def, so I could not hear a d**n word you said).

Softly passing by,

they fall to your toes,

these scattered, whispered words.

(One word that describes me).

(Delusional) : )

GOOD WORK, I liked it. : )

Answer 3

"avalanche"

Answer 4

Name the poem after the woman's name.

Answer 5

The unspoken word speaks volumes, doesn't it?

Lemme go see if I can stir up some silence...

G' night!

*EDIT: It's a beautiful title, and a beautiful poem...

Answer 6

i like   softly      rather than softness

" I can hear you softly" is that a song?

or did you just write it?   this is very  quiet and gentle, seductive... It could be a mantra.. Whispered words melt"

Answer 7

How about "Taboo" ?

All that whispering gives me the idea of two lovers having an affair ??

Answer 8

`The Question Is Blowing in the Wind;' or frankly I would just stick with `42.'

Answer 9

Lovely poem, words personified.  I have no suggestion for your title.

Answer 10

i came up with Gentle Wind.

..which then made me appreciate your 1 word title.

i like your title better actually

because of the single word.

Answer 11

Sorry, I think the title is perfect. A wonderful love poem.

Answer 12

What about "Music of Words"?

Answer 13

Gental Whisper

Answer 14

Strands of Gossamer

Answer 15

I like your title or either Whispered Words or Listening.

nfd♥

Answer 16

the whisperer....

Answer 17

Either "Secret" of "Gossip"

Answer 18

Whisper   or   the Whisper of  words

Answer 19

Romantic Semantics

Sweet Nothings

How about something simple and elegant like  "whispered"

This is a romantic and sensual poem.  It's really amazing how you can create such a vivid image in so few words.

Answer 20

Fried Chicken.

Answer 21

I like it just as it is.