This poem is called Someday (Poem)?

Question

someday you will love me,

someday you'll care,

someday you'll treasure the moments we shared,

someday you'll want me,

someday you'll see,

how helpless and lonely a lifetime can be,

someday you'll find love is'nt a game,

someday you'll find i'm not the same,

my heart will not be, my love will have died,

and then you'll remember the tears i once cried,

someday you'll hear a poem or a song,

and say oh god i was so so wrong,

someday you'll love me ,

someday you'll care,

but someday my darling I won't be

there. Someday!!!!!!!

Answer 1

Well Victoria we certainly know that someday something will happen don't we.

In its present form it is not a poem which I can give an acceptable  appraisal of.

There are far to many Someday, two or three would have been sufficient.

Perhaps something on these lines:-

Some day you will love me, you will care.

You will treasure the moments we shared

and you will want me; you will see.

Some day you will find love is not a game

and you will find that I am not the same.

My love will have died within my heart but

you will remember the tears that I cried.

Some day you will read a poem or hear a song

and you will say to yourself "Was I so wrong?"

You will realize that you loved me, that you cared,

but some day my darling I will not be there.

This is more now a piece of prose, but this is only a suggestion.