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Thoughts on my poem about cheating....please?

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One too many lies

He was at work,

What harm could i do?

You tasted so good on my lips,

I had no idea that he knew.

I tryed to explain,

Apologies around the clock,

He just shook his head,

And reached for his glock.

He took his life that night,

Leaving me dirty and confused,

So I decided to shower,

And try to think some things through.

That's when I looked up,

and as if a sign from on high,

thousands of spiders spun down,

Guess i told one too many lies.

I didn't try to fight them,

Oddly, they felt pleasurable,

Crawling all over my skin,

Naked and completely vulnerable.

The pleasure ended abruptly,

As they sunk in their fangs,

Blood draining my body,

Flesh quickly rotting away.

My life is seeping out of me,

But i'm not caring at all,

The spiders take their leave,

and to h**l my soul falls.

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  1. I would like to know more about what happened it seems way to deep for their not to be more behind it.  I think it is wonderful all in all, but leaves me confused because someone seems CRAZY.


  2. Um... I think its a little dramatic but I guess I like it

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