Thoughts on my poem??

Question

another one of my poems, please give me your honest feedback! it doesn't have a title yet, im still working on that.. here it is:

Fast forward to a few years down the road,

As someone dares to mention the night.

The night where lies came undone and secrets surfaced,

Promises were broken; and likewise friendships.

The night that made us once shiver,

And felt like the demolishing of life as we knew it.

But instead of wincing at the very thought,

We all laugh at the epiphany of childishness we created.

Answer 1

wow...pretty thoughtful..i can never write a poem this good

although you wrote "The night" to many times..

you know the tittle should be "the night"

that would make sense.