Thus good????

Question

the drowing of new orlean

the water rose very swirftly, tears of angusih mixed with the rain thousands of faces,just a blur,but all recognized the look of pain husbands,wives,sons and daughters,with no movement they all drift by watching all this happen elsewhere, the atrocity made us all cry GOD has not forsaken you,and mother nature still loves you all blame all the beau crates in the goverment,for not building a higher wall i truly hope that this is the end of it,because as people we cannot endure much more and that we have the strenght,when it is our trun to face HEAVENS door

do you guys like thus???????/

Answer 1

Great feelings from the heart.  Nice going!!

Answer 2

Hi grumpy,

That was lovely, I'm thinking you are speaking of NEW ORLEANS?  You are very poetic, I'm in the U.K., and haven't experience that you've have

stinkydog

Answer 3

heaven omg this is so beautiful im like tearin up awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... so yeah i wrote a very heartfelt song on here and i wanna know if it's good omg you amaze me sista you amaze the h**l outta me im sorry for going off on you your my bestie and i luv yah