Title "Still Living" Please give your honest opinion

Question

the air for a poet

is so thick

to write is to breathe

Im aching

and only for a certain

moment to arrive

im immersed in elation

a pen with ink

craddled in my palm

hled by my fingers

controlled by my thoughts

im only left to wander my pages

and sort through my metaphors

that all have a theme

I come and say

writing

is...

me

my way of life

my form

my finale

the air for a poet

is so thick

but

to write is to breathe

Answer 1

I loved your poem It's really good.

Answer 2

I think it is very evocative, the imagery is just so sublime. I cannot tell you how much that I love this. Truly talented!

Answer 3

amazing

i loved it

great job