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Title/thoughts of this poem.?

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Standing with my sister,

see you across the room.

You slowly walk up,

looking mesmerized.

I raise my hand to shake yours,

but you raise yours to shake hers.

Gazing in her eyes,

I wave at your face.

But no hands appear,

there is no waving in sight.

Glance down at my feet,

there's nothing but floor.

Stare at the window in horror,

a reflection is projected.

A boy, a sister,

but where have I gone?

I've vanished, disappeared.

I don't exist.

He kisses her,

it should have been me.

Kneeling at his feet,

screaming "LOOK AT ME!"

He doesn't hear a peep,

doesn't feel my grasp.

A voice inside urging,

"Be yourself and you'll appear."

But who am I?

I thought I knew.

Curled up on the floor

screaming "I'm me. Now see me."

But there's no interest in "me."

Only in her.

I thouch my cheek,

feel nothing.

Invisible to them both,

and now to myself.

Dissolving into the air,

slowly and effortlessly.

No one notices I've gone.

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  1. i like this poem. it seems like a bad dream i have had before. not all poems have to be happy to be good... have you read Annabell Lee by Edgar Allen Poe? it is a little... creepy, but still good...


  2. The Disappearing Act

    or

    Invisible Me

    either way nice poem

  3. for whom the bell tolls nice poem

  4. Disturbia.

  5. eidith bittle died 1756. rip.

  6. Losing Touch.

    nice poem.

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