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Title to poem?

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Any ideas of how the title of this poem relates to it? I really don't know - I've been trying to figure it out. It's called "Pulse Hypnotics."

In through one side,

Out through the other.

Metal in, blood out.

Look down, pass out.

A coma before your blackout is

Influenza before your crime -

You’ve been given time to save yourself.

A white room, a white bed.

White clothes…

The deed is undone.

Try again today and succeed,

Try tomorrow and fail.

Nothing’s as bad as it seems,

But it is.

Trust yourself, but

Throw yourself away.

It’s not wanted.

In through one side -

Metal in, put in,

Out through the other -

There’s no more bleeding,

There’s no more me.

* Your interpretation would be nice, too.

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  1. If I were you I would stop trying to figure it out and just absorb it. Some poetry isn't meant to be understood. Some poetry is just mental graffiti.


  2. HOSPITAL related to life and death

    pulse=life

    Hypnotic=drugs induce sleep

  3. kud u give me feedback on my question !!!!!!!!

  4. Pulse hypnotics;

    Pulse- meaning rate at which blood pumps,

    Hypnotics- meaning sleeping drugs

    Pulse Hypnotics meaning slowed rate of blood pumping, till ending in cold death (sleep)

    I think the Poem is about....

    about trying to fit in, then realizing

    worthlessness and suicide,

    i would call this poem

    No more me

      

    or; undone

    deed

  5. "no more"

  6. "Redemption, Oh So Nice"

    Now that's one h**l of a title for one h**l of a poem like yours!

  7. I think it has to do with either a person getting stabbed or somehow bleeding to death, hence their heartbeat and pulse racing. I don't know, that's weird.
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