To be finished, but what do you think so far..?

Question

The Wedding Rehersal.

The Young lady;

You have taken my heart,

and my hand,

now I wear will this wedding band.

To have and to hold,

forever, Amen?

The young man;

Our Love today is like our life for the future,

Scarey and fresh, the wounds we'll suture.

Lady;

Sweeetheart my most darling one of all,

How can you assure me for another woman you'll not fall.

Man;

Oh not I, never doubt, Sweet Beautiful and silly one,

for you are the rising and setting of my sun,

I'll be with you through thick and thin,

My hearrt, and my love you did win.

Never will Mine eyes look at another,

For you will soon be my all, my friend, my lover.

18 yrs later.

Man;

Grap us another beer and this time do it for daddy without fear,

Then get those wrotten and noisy kids outa here,

Or you'll get it again,

you silly woman.

Woman;

Heres the dinner youv'e been waiting for luv,

Can I have some money for the kids school ?

They really need it for more books an

Answer 1

It was unique, and different and yes nice easy read telling a story for many that will feel the familiarity of been there done that!

Answer 2

i like it but keep working on it i love it actually it is great

but i still needs a little bit of work