To people who are good with writing/english?

Question

could you please copy and paste or re type the following letter making any corrections that are needed. Or if there is something you think should be there written a different way. Also if you have any ideas i can add on including a good ending, as you can see the letter isnt complete

thank you heres the letter

I , Stephanie Lang, believe I would truly like to be selected to take on the role of birthday planner because I believe I am the type of person who would be good at it, and I know it is a task I would enjoy. I am good at getting to know people and believe I would find it easy to figure out an individuals interest which would allow me to plan events to suit them as an individual. I also have good organizational skills so there won’t be a task too big, and I will never forget a birthday. I am happy to get involved in anything that comes my way, besides drama that is. I am a proud member of the SECTA dance team and I would love the opportunity to be birthday planner so that I can get more involved with what I love to do.

If I were to be selected as birthday planner I would be sure to make that team members school day special, considering that day only comes once. For example beautify their locker with birthday decorations. Or something as simple as a happy birthday card from the whole team and their favorite treat sent to their first period class. Either way it will be unquestionable that

Answer 1

I , Stephanie Lang, would like to be selected to take on the role of birthday planner because, not only would i enjoy it, I would do a great job. I excel at getting to know people and i like the challenge of finding a persons interests which would allow me to plan events to best suit them as an individual. In addition, I have excellent organizational skills so there won’t be a task too big and I will never forget an appointment or birthday.  I am a proud member of the SECTA dance team and I would love the opportunity to be a birthday planner so that I can get more involved with what I love to do.

If I were to be selected as birthday planner I would be sure to make each team member's day special, considering that day only comes once. For example, I would beautify their locker with birthday decorations.  Or possibly something as simple as having a happy birthday card from the whole team along with their favorite treat to their first period class. I would strive to find something unique to do for each person.  Either way it will be unquestionable that their special day wasn't forgotten in our busy lives.  

Thank you for your consideration.  

Sincerely,

Stephanie Lang

Answer 2

I , Stephanie Lang, believe I would truly like to be selected to take on the role of birthday planner because I believe I am the type of person who would be good at it and I know it is a task I would enjoy. I am good at getting to know people and believe I would find it easy to figure out an individuals interest which would allow me to plan events to suit them as an individual. I also have good organizational skills so there won’t be a task too big nor small. I am a proud member of the SECTA dance team and I would love the opportunity to be birthday planner so that I can get more involved with what I love to do.

If I were to be selected as birthday planner; I would be sure to make that team members special day. For example beautify their locker with birthday decorations or something as simple as a happy birthday card from the whole team and their favorite treat sent to their first period class.

Either way it will be unquestionable that I will make sure that persons day will get the utmost attention.Seeing the persons face will give me the greatest satisfaction knowing I done a excellent job.

Thank You for your consideration

Sincerely,

Answer 3

I, Stephanie Lang, believe I would truly like to be selected to take on the role of the birthday planner because I am the type of person who would do well at it, and it is a task I would enjoy. I am good at getting to know people and believe I would find it easy to figure out an individuals interest which would allow me to plan events to suit them as an individual. I also have good organizational skills so there won’t be a task too big, and I will never forget a birthday. I would be happy to get involved in anything that comes my way, besides drama that is. I am a proud member of the SECTA dance team and I would love the opportunity to be the birthday planner so that I can get more involved with what I love to do.

If I were to be selected as birthday planner I would make sure that the team members school day is special, considering that it only comes once. For example, beautify their locker with birthday decorations. Or something as simple as a happy birthday card from the whole team and their favorite treat sent to their first period class. Either way it will be unquestionable that i would do a good job.

(i dont know about the last sentence) lol