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Trying out a new style of writing, opinions please?

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Hey won't you come with me to a land not even our eyes can

see, your ears could be deaf, your vision gone blind for this only exists inside your

mind those manners when lip hits strip cause the last vacation that you wants a bad

trip wherever you want, and wherever you go let your mind recline so its thoughts can

grow up real quick, don't wanna come down from space about face but we're still grounded

inside a room under lock, under key in my brain lie the memories that let me be

what i have become, though my soul is one, I have just left the third rock from the sun.

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  1. definately an interesting poem, keep writing i like that style!


  2. Sounds like rap, its quite nice though.

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