Trying to keep this short..?

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Trying to keep this short..

I know in my heart my ex girlfriend is my soul mate.

We have been together just at 1 year. During that year we either got along incredibly good or we fought. Sometimes we even got a little physical, initiated by her. She lived with me and I asked her to leave several times (I regret it soooo bad). I was pushing her away because I was afraid of loving her and being loved.

Finally I broke up with her and realized she was my soul mate. I begged her to come back and to be with me and she told me no.

How do I know she’s my soul mate? I cant stop thinking about her I feel her in my heart and dream about her. I have dated a lot of women and just cant seem to get over her.

I even resorted to meditation and there a hypnosis that takes you back threw childhood and into past lives and she was my wife.

In 1877 we where recently married and I heard her yelling for me and caught 2 men raping her I had a gun and shot them and then was shot by someone else that I couldn’t see I landed on top of her and she cried as I died.

I KNOW WEIRD BUT IT WORKS PLEASE TELL WHAT YOU THINK.

Answer 1

If this is the basis of a story, it needs a lot of reworking to catch the interest of the reader.

If you are speaking of a real relationship, then you have the wrong section. (Hmmm, she already shed all those tears for your dying, so she doesn't want to go through that again soon. Maybe after 4 or 5 more lifetimes, she will be over it and give you another chance.  In the meantime you will have to make-do with someone else.)

Tell us if this is a story you are writing and I can give you more hints on what is wrong with it...