Twilight fanfic do you like?

Question

i wrote this fanfic read it and see if you like it! please review!!!!

http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/live_preview.php?storyid=3716701&chapter=1

Answer 1

its okay

there was one part where it wasnt in bellas view?

'Bella grabbed the mic'? but it was good

i didnt read the song though i dont know if i shoulda?

Answer 2

idk its alright

Answer 3

didnt work

Answer 4

its not workingg :[

Answer 5

i can't read it