okay so i have two story ideas, both I'm working on, and I'm wondering which would be better.
okay so heres two summerys of the story's sorry, if its a little long tough
the new found force
this story is about 4 teenagers (somwere between 16-18) who, after there parents get killed by a drugie who is hoped up on a new drug, decide to take on the mob. now i know this idea isn't completely original but bear with me, the 4 kids all are pretty different, one is a computer expert on anything related to computers, he normally stays at the nff base providing the team with info and help from his computer, his name is phreak (it is a slang term for hacker), the next one is kind of a scout, he knows who is who whats what weres were, and so on, he goes by fox, and of course theres one who is the tough guy, now the tough guy needs no description, exept his family had a weapons collection. now the last one is the leader, at first i wanted him to stand out from the group and make him as normal as possible, but instead, he seems normal until the first time he kills somone, then that's the point in the story he slowly descends into insanity he is jeik. now the story isn't "they go in guns a blazing 4 on a 100 battle and somhow they win the fight" no, instead they play it smart by messing with the gangs...whats the word...empire thats it, they mess with it untill its unstable and THEN theres the big bang. so thats new found force (NFF)
next is strange luck
now strange luck, this is the after effect of me trying to think of a story that atleast i havent heard of yet, it focuses around a guy who comes from a line of very very depressed people, and heres the thing, they cant kill themselfs, its not like they are about to jump off a ledge then think "oh i'll just go get a hooker i'll feel better" no its like if they try to shoot them self the bullets will be duds or the gun gets jams, or if they try to hang themselfs the rope will break, you get the deal right? they try but **** goes wrong. now all this guy wants out of life is sweet death, or a good reason to live, and the story takes place when he finaly finds a reason, and well i wont spoil the ending but by the end he finaly figures out if his strang luck is bad luck or good luck. so ya thats strang luck
so heres the question which sounds better, and if you could put in some critisiem, tell me what might spice up the story a little what ever i have babbled on enough
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