Ultimate spellcaster yugioh deck please rate

Question

this is a quick deck i made using the magician starter deck as a base. please rate 1-10 and give me advice. i want to use the advanced format.

3 dark magician

1 dark magician girl

1 dark sage

1 sorcerer of dark magic

1 dark magician knight

1 elemental mistress doriado

1 white magician pikeru

1 gemini elf

1 time wizard

1 rapid-fire magician

1 dark eradicator warlock

1 mythical beast cerberus

1 chaos command magician

1 skilled dark magician

1 blast magician

1 royal magical library

1apprentice magician

1 sage’s stone

1 knight’s title

1 doriado’s blessing

1 second coin toss

1 graceful dice

1 mystical space typhoon

1 heavy storm

1 lightning vortex

1 mage power

1 magical blast

1 spell absorption

1 premature burial

1 nightmare’s steelcage

1 nobleman of crossout

1 reload

1 mystic box

1 magical dimension

1 diffusion wave-motion

1 swords of revealing light

1 dark magic attack

1 magic cylinder

1 elemental burst

1 magical hats

1 skull dice

1 pitch-black power stone

1 divine wrath

1 spell shield type-8

Answer 1

all is very good... but it could use "the wiked avatar" i won 20 tornaments with it.

Answer 2

well first of all u have way to many dark magician's u should only have one and at the most have 2, u and take out either the dark eradicator warlock or the dark magician knight her is my deck its pretty powerful but dont copy its just and example:

monster cards:

1. dark magician
2. dark magician girl
3. gilford the lightening
4. gemini elf
5. magical exemplar
6. blizzard dragon
7. blast magician
8. skilled dark magician
9. magician's valkyria +2
10. kings knight
11. jacks knight
12. queens knight
13.defender, the magical knight
14. breaker the magical warrior
15. familiar knight
16. marauding captain
17. apprentice magician +3
18. old vindictive magician +3
19. mythical beast cerberus

spell cards:

1. dark magic curtain
2. mage power
3. ancient rules
4. dark magic attack
5. magicians unite
6. monster reborn
7. spell power grasp
8. swords of revealing light
9. magical dimension
10. lightening vortex
11. summoner's art
12. magical blast

trap cards:

1. pitch-black power stone +2
2. draining shield
3. negate attack
4. magic cylinder
5. magicians circle
6. sakuretsu armor
7. hidden book of spell
8. seven tools of the bandit

45 cards total

Answer 3

U should get  DMOC their one of the best spellcasters out there right now. plus if u have the right cards u can win the duel on ur second turn:)