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Untitled Poem?

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I wish you could see

Just how much you've hurt me

I'm not sure what I would do

If I came across you

I don't know if my heart could take it

Would I have a fit

Or would I smile

And stand there for awhile

Would I break down and cry

Or wish that I would die

I wonder what you would do

Would you stand there too

Or would you run away

Sometimes I wish I could make you pay

Sometimes I wish it would restart

And then I wouldn't show you my heart

I would've learned from my mistake

And that way my heart wouldn't break

Last night I had a dream I wish could come true

Because in it I forgot all about you

For some reason I can't seem to stop

Maybe it's cause you made my heart flip flop

You never gave me a chance

At first you did a dance

Making me believe I had one

Then all of a sudden you were done

Yet still I think about you

And wonder what I'm going to do

What do you think? If you have a name for it too that's be great

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  1. This poem is indeed about heartache

    and pain.

    Asking the person who caused you the pain

    will be more painful

    but just to send a message

    it will come back to break his heart

    I wouldn't wish for death

    this could hurt the people who love you

    Its true this will take time to heal

    You desserve someone who will treat you right

    instead of a punching bag.

    Over time you will forget this person

    who hurt you but it will take time.


  2. I like it! and even though this may seem like a weird title how about The Breaking Truth?

  3. This is bloody fantastic! You have a rare talent. Oh my, this is just so evocative!
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