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I keep waiting for him

but, he does not come

glowing dim as many embers

pieces of life

passed and done

embracing a vision

percieving things

where I desire them to be

bleak reality

oh how I wish it to be

so far off from me

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  1. LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT


  2. that is very passionate. i love it. most women feel that way. but you made it into n artform in writting. dragon girl is write.

  3. I would title it "Pieces of Life.."

  4. this sounds like what i feel...i liked it,

    keep writing!!!

  5. I feel u girl  honestly . I think it is wonderful
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