Use quotation marks and commas to punctuate these sentences correctly?

Question

No Ms. Elliot replied you may not go.

Watch out! yelled the coach.

Please bring my coat called Renee.

After thinking for a momen, Paul said I don't believe you.

Dad said Remember to be home by 9:00 p.m.

Finish your projects said the art instructor.

Go back instructed Mom and comb your hair.

I won't be needing my winter coat anymore replied Mel-ling

He said how idd you do that?

I stood and said My name is Rosaalita.

No said Misha I will not attend.

Don't forget to put your name on your paper said the teacher.

Pay attention class said out history teacher.

As I came into the house, Mom called Dinner is almost ready!

Jake, come when I call you said Mother.

How was your trip to France Mrs.Shaw?asked Deborah.

Answer 1

"No," Ms. Elliot replied.  "You may not go."  ("No," Ms. Elliot replied, "you may not go."   would also be correct.)

"Watch out!" yelled the coach.

"Please bring my coat," called Renee.

After thinking for a moment, Paul said, "I don't believe you."

Dad said, "Remember to be home by 9:00 p.m."

"Finish yoiur projects," said the art instructor.

"Go back," instructed Mom, "and comb your hair."

"I won't be needing my winter coat anymore," replied Mel-ling.

He said, "How did you do that?"

I stood and said, "My name is Rosalita."

"No," said Misha.  "I will not attend."

"Don't forget to put your name on your paper," said the teacher.

"Pay attention, class," said our history teacher.

As I came into the house, Mom called, "Dinner is almost ready!"

"Jake, come when I call you," said Mother.

"How was your trip to France, Mrs. Shaw?" asked Deborah.

Answer 2

Firstly Brits and Americans do commas differently, so any answer you get might not be right. Here's the American usage: http://grammartips.homestead.com/inside....

Answer 3

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